Being something of a perfectionist, I was a little disappointed to discover that a set of final changes and corrections that I had made to the article did not appear in the published article. Below is a “comparison” draft that shows those changes and corrections. The most interesting substantive changes are:
1. The addition of cites to Marjorie Garber – who points out the “weights and measures” imagery in “Measure for Measure” (bringing to mind Mariana’s 1599 work “Of Weights and Measures”), and who attempts to place the Duke’s marriage proposal to Isabella into the context of the Duke’s representation of King James and Isabella’s representation of Elizabeth. For the curious, I note that Professor Garber’s book was first published after the original draft of my paper appeared on the www.Shaksper.net.
2. The addition of a bit of pure speculation about Shakespeare’s links to Edmund Campion, in FN 116:
“ The speculation that Robert
Arden, a canon of
A Picture in Little Is Worth a Thousand Words:
Debasement in Hamlet and Measure for Measure
article proposes that the corruption that pervades Hamlet’s
an allegory for debasement of the coinage. The “debasement” hypothesis provides
new answers in the debate on the timing and authority of the different versions
of Hamlet, and offers a solution to
some if not all of the “problems” of Measure
In Hamlet, debasement yields a consistent and reasonable interpretation of three passages that have not yet been satisfactorily interpreted. When Hamlet says that Claudius’s “picture in little” is selling for up to one hundred ducats, he is alluding to the fact that Claudius’s picture appears on debased coins that people must accept for value. When Hamlet demands that his mother look upon the “pictures” of old Hamlet and Claudius in a “counterfeit presentment,” he is showing her two coins, one of which is debased. When the “picture in little” and “two pictures” passages are understood to involve debased coins, it becomes evident that the reference to an “innovation” that prompted the “picture in little” line signifies the debasement itself, which has thrown the city into economic turmoil and has caused the tragedians to leave their residence in search of work.
The debasement theory of Hamlet sheds light on the timing and authority of the different
versions of the play primarily because the aforementioned and other debasement
references are missing from Hamlet’s first quarto. The omission of
debasement references, combined with the first quarto’s more sympathetic
treatment of the Queen, suggests that the first quarto was a version of the
play that had been edited and revised to avoid offending King James, either by
a reference to his having debased the Scottish coinage, a perceived attack on
his “divine right” to debase the English coinage, or a suggestion that his
mother had been complicit in his father’s murder.
debasement theme in Hamlet resonates
with the interest in monetary policy that Shakespeare expressed in other plays
including the Lancastrian tetralogy, Troilus
and Cressida and The Merchant of
Venice. Moreover, it supports and is supported by a view of Measure for Measure as
allegory for debasement:
In Measure for Measure, a man named
for a coin (Angelo) is debased and at risk of further debasement, and other
aptly-named characters join forces to prevent further debasement and
to stabilize the coinage. Among other things (as explained in
detail below), the debasement hypothesis provides straightforward
explanations for (1) Isabella’s refusal to trade her chastity for Claudio’s
life; (2) the 5-year period since Angelo abandoned Mariana; (3) Mariana’s
continued love for Angelo over that period; (4) Isabella’s remark that Mariana
would be better off dead; (5) Mariana’s remark that the Duke has “oft still’d
[her] brawling discontent,” (6) the contemporary basis for Mariana’s brother,
the “great soldier Frederick”; (7) the contemporary basis for Mariana’s “moated
grange”; (8) the abrupt “romance” between the Duke and Isabella; (9) the 14–19
year slippage of the laws of Vienna; (10) the excision of Measure for Measure from the Valladolid copy of the Second Folio; (11)
the removal of the Mariana role from William Davenant’s 1662 revision of the
play; and (12) why a play that appears to endorse mercy would have a title
suggestive of retribution. In addition, the Spanish elements in the play
identified in this article, coupled with Shakespeare’s service as a “groom of
the chamber” to the Spanish peace delegation at Somerset House in August 1604,
provide strong evidence that the play was largely written between August 1604
and its first performance that December , somewhat later than previously thought.
DEBASEMENT IN CONTEXT
At least since the time of
writers have used debasement of the
coinage as a metaphor for human
Shakespeare’s use of the device in Hamlet
has been described as “pervasive.”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
Measure for Measure, the “coin image”
has been said to “run throughout the play.”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
these allusions and metaphors mean little to us, living as we do in an age in
which nearly all the currencies of the world are completely “debased” (that is,
have no precious metal content), they played upon the concern that
Shakespeare’s audiences had for the stability of the English currency.
Throughout the Middle Ages and into the Renaissance, government-controlled
mints produced coins made primarily of gold and silver, and monarchs faced a
constant temptation to add base metal to the coinage in order to turn a quick
was left to Henry’s daughter and Edward’s sister—
As Elizabeth’s reign drew to a close, it is likely that Shakespeare—and others whose livelihood depended on a stable economy—would have feared that James would consider it his “Divine Right”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> to debase the English coinage.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> These concerns would have reached their peak during the period 1599–1605, which included the writing and possible first performance of Hamlet between 1599–1601, King James’s accession in 1603, the publication of Hamlet’s first quarto in 1603, the publication of Hamlet’s second quarto in 1604–05, and the performance of Mesur for Mesur by “Shaxberd” before the King on December 26, 1604.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
PICTURE IN LITTLE
Hamlet, Claudius debases practically
everyone and everything he comes into contact with. He debases Gertrude,
Laertes, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, and possibly Polonius. He has debased
the throne of
The first overt clue that Claudius has debased the coinage occurs after Rosencrantz informs Hamlet that the tragedians of the city are traveling:
Ham. How chances it they travel?
Ros. I think their inhibition comes by the means of the late innovation[?].
Ham. Do they hold
the same estimation they did when I was in the City?
. . . <![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
Ham. It is not very strange; for my uncle is king of Denmark, and those that would make mouths at him while my father lived, give twenty, forty, fifty,<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> a hundred ducats apiece [a peece]<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> for his picture in little. ‘Sblood, there is something in this more than natural, if philosophy could find it out.”
2.2.328–34; 359–64 (emphasis added).
Hamlet’s reference to Claudius’s “picture in little” has an accepted and superficially plausible interpretation. A picture in little is a “miniature portrait”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> and people have historically purchased and worn such objects to express their devotion to popular leaders. In Shakespeare’s time, Queen Elizabeth’s courtiers proudly wore her “picture in little” pinned to their chests.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Under a literal, single-meaning “miniature portrait” interpretation, it is therefore not necessarily surprising that in corrupt Denmark the courtiers have facilely shifted their alliances from Old Hamlet to his successor. It is also not particularly surprising that this would irk Hamlet.
there is no good reason for Shakespeare to import this particular Elizabethan
artifact into medieval
Understanding “picture in little” as a reference to coinage bearing Claudius’s image solves these problems, and makes for a better line. Even without props, Shakespeare’s audience would have caught the double-meaning: “Picture” was slang for coin—as in “whose purse was best in picture” (WT 4.4.603))<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>—and “picture in little” helps to drive the point home. As if that weren’t enough, Shakespeare’s “a peece”—another synonym for coin<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>—points to the same meaning.
Analogous treatments of coins in Romeo and Juliet and Cymbeline support the coinage interpretation. In Romeo and Juliet, after describing the evil of gold and handing over forty gold ducats to the apothecary, Romeo says: “I sell thee poison; thou hast sold me none” (5.1.83). Thus Romeo, like Hamlet with his “picture in little” line, describes the purchase of a good as the sale of a coin.
In Cymbeline, Shakespeare uses “piece” for “coin” in a manner that also resembles the “picture in little” line:
For Innogen’s dear life
take mine; and though
’Tis not so dear, yet ’tis a life; you coin’d it.
’Tween man and man they
weigh not every stamp;
Though light, take pieces for the figure’s sake. (Cym. 5.5.116–119)
As David Bevington explains, the injunction to “take pieces for the figure’s sake” refers to the fact that “even if some coins may be under the exact weight, men accept them for the sake of the image stamped thereon, i.e. the image of the king.”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The “picture in little” line similarly alludes to the fact that the image on the coin is, in the end, what people are giving value for.
Accordingly, Elizabethans would have readily appreciated that a “picture in little” of a monarch selling for up to a hundred ducats “a peece” referred primarily to the appearance of the monarch’s picture on coins. Hamlet is making a biting comment on the fact that people who used to despise Claudius—including presumably Hamlet himself—are now forced to exchange value for Claudius’s “picture,” because Claudius’s picture now appears “in little” on the coins of the realm. The fact that “picture in little” could mean a miniature portrait as well as a coin makes the line better—and more consistent with the delight Hamlet takes both in punning and in confusing Rosencrantz and Guildenstern.
ordinary Elizabethan playgoer might have stopped the analysis at this point (or
long before), and laughed with Hamlet at the double entendre for coins. But a
more contemplative playgoer—or someone reading
the play closely—might have noticed something else. Given that ducats in other
European countries during Shakespeare’s time were coins having significant
value (on the order of a few shillings), the introduction of a 100-ducat coin
could only mean that the currency in question had been debased. Only in a
debasement could a mint produce a 100-ducat coin of a manageable size.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
The theory that “picture in little” refers to coins is bolstered by the presence of two other references in Hamlet to Claudius’s coinage. One of these occurs in a later encounter with Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, when Hamlet says that like a sponge, Rosencrantz “soaks up the King’s countenance, his rewards, his authorities” (4.2.14–15). Although “King’s countenance” has typically been translated as the king’s “favour”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> or “favorable looks,”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> realizing that the King’s countenance appears on coins of the realm helps us see that this is another double-entendre for coins: Hamlet is telling the courtiers that he knows they have been bought.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
COINAGE OF THE BRAIN
The second reference to Claudius’s picture on coins occurs in the Queen’s Closet Scene. Shortly after killing the eavesdropping Polonius, Hamlet confronts his mother:
“Look here upon this picture, and on this,
The counterfeit presentment of two brothers.
See what a grace was seated on this brow,
Hyperion’s curls, the front of Jove himself,
An eye like Mars to threaten and command,
A station like the herald Mercury
New lighted on a heaven-kissing hill,
A combination, and a form indeed
Where every god did seem to set his seal
To give the world assurance of a man.
This was your husband. Look you now what follows.
Here is your husband, like a mildew’d ear,
Blasting his wholesome brother. Have you eyes?”
3.4.53–67 (emphases added).
one knows how Shakespeare intended this scene to be staged. In some
productions, Hamlet pulls two miniature portraits out of his cloak, perhaps on
the assumption that the scene is supposed to be staged with miniatures,
consistent with the “picture in little” line.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
difficulty in determining the type of paintings Shakespeare intended raises the
question whether Hamlet is showing his mother paintings in the first place.
After all, one would not expect Claudius’s portrait to depict him as a
“mildewed ear,” that is, a mildewed ear of grain such as wheat or corn.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
These difficulties fall away if the “two pictures” passage is staged with coins and the Claudius coin is debased. We have already seen that “picture” was slang for coin in Shakespeare’s day, and Hamlet already used “picture” in that sense in the “picture in little” line. The language of coinage—“counterfeit”—provides another strong hint that Shakespeare was contemplating coins in general and debased coins in particular for this scene.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The “counterfeit presentment” line is thus another double-entendre: The coins are a “counterfeit presentment” in that they contain two pictures (counterfeit being a synonym for picture);<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> but the comparison of the two coins is also a “counterfeit presentment” in the sense that it shows one to be a counterfeit—a counterfeit (debased) coin depicting a counterfeit (debased) king.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
When the two pictures are viewed as coins, the lines “Here is your husband, like a mildew’d ear,//Blasting his wholesome brother,” come into focus. If the “pictures” are coins and the Claudius coin is debased, Hamlet can be seen as referring to the fact that when mingled together—in a palm, in a purse, or in the circulation of the currency of the realm—the debased Claudius coins “infect” the “wholesome” coins bearing Old Hamlet’s image.
“Ear” as metaphor for coin resonates with two earlier
references to ears in the play. When the ghost tells Hamlet that “the whole ear
In naming the usurping issuer of debased coins “Claudius” and
referring to coins as “ears,” Shakespeare may have been recalling the Roman
Emperor Claudius’s reconquest of
Returning to the Queen’s closet scene, we come upon a line that ties together all the references to coins. Hamlet sees and speaks to the ghost and is surprised that Gertrude cannot see it. She thinks it’s a manifestation of his madness:
“This is the very coinage of your brain.” (3.4.139)
is simply a much better line if Hamlet has been showing her coins, and it
demonstrates that Gertrude too is capable of wordplay. It is also the first
documented use of “coinage” as metaphor in the English language.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
The Queen’s closet scene contains several additional allusions to the debased coinage. By presenting the debased Claudius coin to Gertrude, Hamlet forces her to “turn [her] eyes into [her] very soul, where she sees “black and grained spots,” 3.4.89–90, recalling the black and uneven quality of debased coins.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Similarly, in referring to “the fatness of these pursey times” (3.4.155), Hamlet evokes the image of purses fat with debased coins, just as calling Claudius a “bloat king” (3.4.184) calls to mind the inflation caused by a debasement.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Hamlet’s reference to Claudius as a “king of shreds and patches” (3.4.103) might also refer to the appearance of debased coins whose veneer has worn off unevenly.
In the absence of any other hint of financial wrong-doing by Claudius, the proposed debasement neatly explains why Hamlet calls Claudius a “cutpurse of the empire and the rule, that from a shelf the precious diadem stole, and put it in his pocket” (3.4.99–101). The diadem at issue is not Old Hamlet’s crown—which was on Old Hamlet’s head, not a shelf—but the royal prerogative to debase the coinage. Shakespeare acknowledges that debasement is a royal prerogative—as he would again in King Lear, by having Lear say “they cannot touch me for coining, I am the King himself”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>—but insists that it be maintained on a shelf, presumably to be used only when necessary for the common good. It is wrong for the monarch to debase the coinage to line his own pockets, as Hamlet is accusing Claudius of doing.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
DEBASEMENT AS INNOVATION
In fact, they are probably all wrong. A simpler explanation is that the actors’ “inhibition” arises from the inflation and other economic turmoil caused by the “innovation” of new, debased “Claudius” coins being issued to finance the war with Norway (and possibly to line Claudius’s pockets).<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Accordingly, in this exchange, Rosencrantz and Hamlet are both talking about coinage in general and the debasement in particular, as both the “inhibition” of the actors, and the seemingly high “prices” paid by the public for Claudius’s picture, are caused by the issuance of the debased coinage. Under this theory, Rosencrantz’s lack of certainty— “I think” the inhibition comes by means of the late innovation<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>—also makes sense: Rosencrantz doesn’t have personal knowledge as to why the players are on the road, but it stands to reason that during economic hard times, people in the city will spend less money on entertainment, and even established actors may have to leave the city in search of a livelihood.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> This passage thus reflects the personal stake that Shakespeare had in maintaining a pure coinage: just as a debasement forced the esteemed tragedians to travel, it could equally wreak havoc on the livelihood of the Lord Chamberlain’s Men—not to mention Shakespeare’s own plans for a secure income in his retirement.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
the players themselves can be seen as metaphors for a fluctuating coinage—with
each role, a player is coined anew. The impact of the “innovation” on the
players—causing them to travel—calls to mind that during a debasement, a
country’s precious metal holdings tend to leave the country, as foreign
merchants refuse to accept the debased currency.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
Consistent with this metaphorical use of players for coins, Hamlet later instructs the players not to step outside of their roles, to “o’erstep not the modesty of nature” (3.2.19). He complains that he has “heard others praise, <![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> and that highly” (3.2.29–30) actors that “imitated humanity . . . abominably” (3.2.35). Here, Hamlet is observing that hollow and unnatural actors are poor representations of humanity, just as debased coins are poor substitutes for pure coins.
At this point, the following exchange takes place:
Hamlet: . . . they imitated humanity so abominably.
First Player: I hope we have reformed that indifferently<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> among us.
Hamlet: O reform it altogether. And let those who play your clowns speak no more than is set down for them—for there be of them that will themselves laugh, to set on some quantity of barren spectators to laugh too, though in the meantime some necessary question of the play be then to be considered. That’s villainous, and shows a most pitiful ambition in the fool that uses it” (3.2.38–45) (emphases added).
The word “reformation” was used by Elizabeth herself to describe her correction of the debasement that occurred under Henry VIII and Edward VI.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Hamlet’s response to the first player thus warns that an isolated reformation may not be sufficient to protect against future debasements. If “clowns” is a pun on “crowns,” then the instruction to the clowns is a warning against debasing the coinage (that is, against issuing coins that “speak” a greater value than what is “set down” for them based on their intrinsic value),<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> and Shakespeare is covertly calling any monarch who debases the coinage “villainous,” “ambitio[us]”, and a “fool.”
Hamlet returns to the debasement theme in a later conversation with Rosencrantz and Guildernstern. As already mentioned, when Hamlet tells Rosencrantz that like a sponge, he “soaks up the King’s countenance” (4.3.14), Hamlet is telling the dynamic duo that he knows they are in the King’s pay. A few lines later, the following exchange occurs:
Ros. My Lord, you must tell us where the body is, and go with us
to the King.
Ham. The body is with the King, but the King is not with the
body. The King is a thing—
Guil. A thing, my lord?
Ham. Of nothing. Bring me to him. (4.2.13–29).
DEBASEMENT IN ALL VERSIONS
To this point, we have been looking primarily at the second quarto, in which the innovation line flows neatly into the picture in little line. In that version of the play, Hamlet’s picture in little line is a fitting response to Rosencrantz’s comment: Rosencrantz observes that the people have stopped following the players not by choice, but because of the debasement; Hamlet points out that people now appear to place high value on Claudius’s picture not by choice, but because of the debasement.
Both the Folio version (F) and the first quarto (Q1) differ significantly from the second quarto (Q2) at this point, and these differences not only support the debasement hypothesis, but they also shed light on the interrelationships between the different versions of the play. The differences between the unedited versions of Q1, Q2, and F can be seen in the following table.
Ham. How comes it that they trauell? Do they grow restie-
Gil. No my Lord, their reputation holds as it was wont.
Ham. How then?
Gil. Yfaith my Lord, noueltie carries it away,
For the principall publike audience that Came to them, are turned to priuate playes, And to the humour of children.
Ham. I doe not greatly wonder of it, For those that would make mops and moes
At my vncle, when my father liued, Now giue a hundred, two hundred pounds For his picture:
Ham. How chances it they trauaile? Their residence both in reputation, and profit was better both wayes.
Ros. I thinke their inhibition, comes by the meanes of the late innouasion.
Ham. Doe they hold the same estimation they did when I was in the Citty; are they so followed.
Ros. No indeede are they not.
Ham. It is not very strange, for my Vncle is King of Denmarke, and Those that would make mouths at him while my father liued, giue twenty, fortie, fifty, a hundred duckets a peece, for his Picture in little, s'bloud there is something in this more then naturall, if Philosophie could find it out.
Ham. How chances it they trauaile? their residence both in reputation and profit was better both wayes.
Rosin. I thinke their Inhibition comes by the meanes of the late Innouation?
Ham. Doe they hold the same estimation they did
When I was in the City? Are they so follow'd?
Rosin. No indeed, they are not.
Ham. How comes it? Doe they grow rusty?
Rosin. Nay, their endeavour keeps in the wonted pace; but there is, sir, an eyrie of children, little eyases, that cry out on the top of the question, and are most tyranically clapped for’t. . . .
* * * [19 lines relating to child actors] * * *
Ham. It is not strange: for mine Vnckle is King of Denmarke, and those that would make mowes at him while my Father liued; giue twenty, forty, an hundred Ducates a peece, for his picture in Little. There is something in this more then Naturall, if Philosophie could finde it out.
different versions appeared in print as follows: Q1 in 1603, after James I’s
accession; Q2 in 1604–05 and F in 1623 (as part of the Folio collection that
purported to contain all of Shakespeare’s plays). Q1 has long been regarded as
a “bad quarto,” a memorial reconstruction by a bit player, although its genesis
and relevance has recently become the focus of considerable scholarly
In the lines in question, Q1 differs substantially from Q2 and F, but Q1 and F both contain references to children that are missing from Q2. A variety of theories exist as to when—or whether—the child actor passage that appears in F was added to Shakespeare’s original text. Most scholars believe that it was added sometime after the original play was staged. Of these, some believe that it was in the source document on which Q2 was based, but was marked for deletion and therefore did not appear in Q2.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Others believe that it was not in the source document underlying Q2, and was thus a later insertion. It is also debated whether the abbreviated “humour of children” passage from Q1 is a condensation of the “little eyases” passage of F, or whether these reflect two different texts.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
hypothesis that “innovation” refers to debasement provides a natural
explanation of the relationships between Q1, Q2, and F. The first thing to
notice is how F differs from Q2. In F, the flow from the innovation line to the
picture in little line—both of which refer to debasement—is interrupted by the
child actor passage. But Hamlet’s response to Rosencrantz’s statement that the
innovation has caused the players to travel—“How comes it, do they grow
rusty?”—still indicates that he knows that the innovation was the debasement,
and that the players are metaphors for coins: a debased coin will rust, whereas
a non-debased coin will not. This difference strongly suggests that the
additional lines in F were in fact an addition; whoever added those lines was
careful to preserve the debasement allusion, but also had something to say
about child actors.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
The differences between Q1 and the other versions are far more dramatic. In Q1, the substitution of “novelty” for “innovation,” the addition of the theme of children, and the use of “restie” for the Folio’s “rusty” effectively remove the most direct reference to debasement. Similarly, the picture in little line itself is gone, along with the reference to 20, 40, 100 ducats—it now really is Claudius’s “picture” for which people are paying “one hundred, two hundred pounds” (7.251–52).
Likewise, Q1 is missing all of the references in the two pictures scene that would support the debasement theory—the “counterfeit presentment”, the “mildewed ear,” the present tense reference to “blasting” the “wholesome brother,” Gertrude’s metaphorical use of “coinage,”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> the “black and grained spots,” and Hamlet’s references to these “pursey times” and to Claudius as “king of shreds and patches,”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “bloat king,”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> and “cutpurse.” In addition, the King of the first quarto is no longer named “Claudius.”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
In Q1, the passage in which Hamlet instructs the players has been rearranged and lengthened to include examples. Hamlet’s line “O, reform it altogether” has been changed to “The better, the better, mend it all together” (9.10),<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> and the line about what the clowns shall say no longer includes the “for them” ending of “what is set down for them” (9.17).<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In addition, Hamlet’s statement that he has “heard others praise, and that highly” (3.2.29–30) the unnatural actors (where praise has the double meaning of “appraise”) has been changed to the unambiguous “heard others commend them, and that highly too” (9.11).
Hamlet’s odd comment to Rosencrantz and Guildenstern—“The body is with the
King, but the King is not with the body. The King is a thing . . . [o]f
nothing” (4.2.26–29)—is missing from Q1; in fact, the preceding sponge passage
has now been moved to a location in the play where Polonius is still alive
by Hamlet to English currency—which might have reflected his preference for
something other than debased Danish currency—are also missing from Q1. His
comment that his thoughts are “too dear a halfpenny” (2.2.273–74) is entirely
gone, and his assertion that he would take the ghost’s word for “a thousand
pound” (3.2.280–81) reads as “I’ll take the ghost’s word for more then all the
Because of the substantial variance between Q1 and the other versions of the play, any single difference could be the result of a faulty recollection on the part of the suspected memorial reconstructor. Nevertheless, the fact that all of the many debasement references are missing from Q1 suggests that something more than poor memory may have been at work. Indeed, Q1 appears to reflect the editorial hand of someone intent on removing all possible traces of a debasement theme. This would be a natural precaution for the newly-ensconced “King’s Men,” who would above all wish to avoid giving offense to their new and royal patron by associating with the evil King Claudius a practice that King James himself had resorted to repeatedly in Scotland.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
GERTRUDE QUEEN OF SCOTS?
Independent support for the notion that the first quarto was meant above all not to give offense to King James comes from its benign treatment of Queen Gertrude (Gertred, in Q1). The parallels between Hamlet’s mother and King James’s mother—Mary, Queen of Scots—have been noticed before: Three months and six days after the murder of her husband (Lord Darnley, James’s father), Mary married the man who was roundly suspected of being the murderer, and within a few more months, the fallout from the event forced Mary to abdicate the throne of Scotland in favor of her then 13-month old son, James.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> An acting company seeking to curry favor with its new sponsor and King would understandably be concerned about the parallels between Gertrude and Mary.
The easiest way to solve the problem would be to trim down and alter Gertrude’s role to remove ambiguities about her possible complicity in the murder and make her more sympathetic all around. That appears to be what was done. Among the many differences in Gertrude’s role between Q1 and the other texts are that (1) Claudius no longer refers to her as his “imperial jointress” and makes no other endearing references to her, (2) the ghost does not instruct Hamlet to leave her to heaven and her conscience, (3) in the closet scene, she categorically denies any involvement in the murder, (4) in the closet scene, the ghost asks Hamlet to “comfort” her, (5) she doesn’t call Laertes’s followers “false Danish dogs,”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> (6) she doesn’t refuse to see Ophelia, and, most significantly (7) a whole scene has been added in which Horatio tells her of Claudius’s attempt to have Hamlet killed, and in which she places herself firmly on Hamlet’s side against Claudius (15.1–34). The result in Q1 is a more sympathetic character, and one less likely to give offense to the new king.
seemingly methodical omission in Q1 of references which in Q2 and F refer to
the debasement theme, together with the significant changes in the queen’s
character, point to the conclusion that Q1 is a version of the play that was
edited by someone intent on not offending King James. This does not answer the
question whether Q1 was a memorial reconstruction or not, but it does suggest
that the text on which Q1 was based comes later in time than those on which Q2
and F were based, and was probably prepared either shortly before or shortly
after King James took the throne in March 1603.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
Accordingly, the proposed debasement not only resolves ambiguities in the picture in little, two pictures, and inhibition/innovation passages, but it also suggests that (1) of the three extant versions, the second quarto’s handling of the picture in little line was closest to Hamlet’s original source, and (2) that the first quarto—edited as it was for the sake of King James—could aptly be renamed the King James Hamlet.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
DEBASEMENT IN MEASURE FOR MEASURE
The debasement theme in Hamlet converges neatly with a
heretofore unappreciated debasement motif in Measure for Measure, and the presence of that motif in Measure for Measure in turn provides
support for a debasement theme in Hamlet.
Not only does Measure for Measure
contain more coinage and testing imagery than any other Shakespeare play, but the character names and the plot
make the play an allegory about
debasement of the coinage. Because the precise contours of
Shakespeare’s allegory are difficult to ascertain, some of what follows
admittedly is speculation. However, the kernel of it—that Shakespeare’s Mariana
represents Juan de Mariana and that the play is a commentary on debasement of
the coinage—can only be rejected by assuming an improbable number of
In Measure for Measure, a character named for an English coin (Angelo, for the English Angel)—whom others view as a model of purity—is actually debased and at risk of becoming irredeemably debased. If the character named for a monarch (Isabella) yields to his entreaties, both the coin and the monarch will be debased. Fortunately, a character named for a Spanish Jesuit who argued against monetary debasement (Mariana, for Juan de Mariana) intervenes, and prevents both from becoming debased. Orchestrating much of the action are characters based loosely on King James (the Duke-Friar) and Shakespeare himself (Lucio, the “fantastic”). The forced marriage of the coin (Angelo) to the anti-debaser (Mariana) reflects Shakespeare’s hope that King James will pursue a policy of non-debasement, and the forced marriage of Lucio to Kate Keepdown mirrors Shakespeare’s own shotgun wedding and thus conveys to the King the playwright’s view that he has already been amply punished for any offense that the play might give.
Angelo is initially presented as absolutely pure.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In his first substantive line in the play, he compares himself to a coin, in danger of being debased. He also makes a veiled reference to the fact that the coin for which he is named (the angel) replaced a coin named the “noble”:
“Now good my Lord
Let there be some more test made of my metal,
Before so noble, and so great a figure
Be stamp’t upon it.” (1.1.47–50)<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
Isabella seizes on the coinage metaphor
when in her first encounter with Angelo, she tells him that if her brother
Claudio “had been as you, and you as he,// you would have slipp’t like him”
(2.2.64–65). A slip was Shakespeare’s way of denoting a counterfeit or debased
Angelo soon fulfills her prophecy by deciding that he will offer her Claudio’s life in exchange for sexual favors. When he reaches this decision, he again alludes to coinage:
“yea, my gravity
Wherein (let no man hear me) I take pride,
Could I with boot change for an idle plume
Which the air beats for vain. O place, O form,
How often dost thou with thy case, thy habit,
Wrench awe from fools and tie the wiser souls
To thy false seeming! Blood, thou art blood.
Let’s write good angel on the devil’s horn:
’Tis not the devil’s crest.” (2.4.9–17)
Here Angelo first points out that his apparent “gravity” is an illusion; that despite outward appearances, his true substance weighs less than a feather, just as a completely debased coin contains no gold or silver.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> He then explains that the mere outer form of a coin—its “case,” “habit,” or “false seeming”—impresses fools and can also govern the actions of those who know better. He muses that if one were to make a coin of the basest material available—the devil’s horn—and stamp the words “good angel” on it, it would pass for value, because, after all, the coin does not depict the devil’s head (crest). This line describes debasement of the coinage perfectly: a base material can be passed as current merely because someone in authority has stamped it.
As mentioned, Isabella is a monarch
figure who is put under enormous pressure to allow the coin (Angelo) to become
debased, in the course of which she herself would become debased. Although
Queen Isabella of
From the Duke-Friar’s observation that
Claudio is not “noble” (an English gold coin from a bygone age) in that all his
“accommodations . . . Are nursed by baseness” (3.1.13–15) and Isabella’s
echoing sentiment that Claudio is “too noble to conserve a life//In base
appliances” (3.1.88–89), we know that Claudio is considered debased.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
The debasement of Claudio and his fiancé Juliet draws on real life as well as
Shakespeare’s past plays. In Shakespeare’s plays, “Juliet” is the woman’s name
most clearly associated with coinage, as in: “O, speak again, bright angel” (Romeo and Juliet, 2.1.68). In real life,
Claudio’s name is associated with
debasement through Hamlet’s King
Claudius and through the Roman Emperor Claudius.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
The time shift worked by linking Claudio to
Edward VI may also explain the fourteen or nineteen years that the laws have
been allowed to “slip.”<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
is Shakespeare’s original creation, not found in his sources. While the name
Mariana was a plausible woman’s name, and was the adjectival form of Mary or
Maria (and thus could be associated with the
Mary, Catholics, Queen Mary Tudor or Mary Queen of Scots),<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
it also happened to be the name of a famous Spanish Jesuit historian and
economic writer who argued against debasement of the coinage—Juan de Mariana.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
Shakespeare tied Mariana to
instilled in Londoners the fear of a second Armada.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
tied Mariana to Jesuits by placing her on a “moated grange” near St. Luke’s
(3.1.265–66). This would tend to make Mariana a Catholic,<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
which is a step in the right direction towards a Jesuit, and which in itself
points to Juan de Mariana. But an express connection between Jesuits and a
moated grange is found in Lyford Grange, the moated manor house where Jesuit
missionary Edmund Campion was captured in 1581.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
the moated grange is Lyford Grange, and especially if Shakespeare was
Shakeshafte, then Shakespeare may have renamed the local church (St. Mary’s) in
honor of Catholic missionary and martyr Luke Kirby. Father Kirby was captured
in 1580 and stood trial and was found guilty of treason along with Campion and
may have been treading on dangerous ground by using the name Mariana at all,
much less portraying her sympathetically. Juan de Mariana, the most famous
Spanish historian of his time, was best known for his controversial 1599 book De Rege et Regis Institutione (“On the
Education of the King”), in which he advocated regicide as a solution to
tyranny, and took positions diametrically opposed to those of King James on the
“divinity” of kings.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
While references to the fourteen and nineteen year time periods correlate to periods in English monetary history—and thus are most closely associated with “English”characters Claudio (Edward) and Isabella (Elizabeth)—the five-year period associated with Mariana appropriately correlates to Spanish monetary history. Thus, the on again off again relationship between Angelo and Mariana tracks the relationship between Juan de Mariana’s philosophy and the Spanish coinage. Until 1599—five years before the first performance of Measure for Measure in 1604—there had been no debasement of the Spanish coinage, consistent with the fact that Mariana and Angelo were “together” five years before the action in the play (5.1.220). In 1599, however, Philip III initiated a policy of debasement, <![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> essentially allowing the coinage to abandon Mariana, just as Angelo abandoned Mariana five years before the action of the play.
primary excuse for having abandoned Mariana—that Mariana’s “reputation was
disvalu’d in levity” (5.1.221)—could be a complaint that Mariana’s book De Rege—published in 1599—was lighter
(had more “levity”) than it would have been had it included Mariana’s thoughts
on debasement, which first appeared in the second edition of De Rege,
dated 1605.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> That
Mariana’s views had become known prior to the December 1604 date of Measure for Measure is consistent with
his outspoken character (he would hardly have maintained his silence through
five years of debasement), his own testimony that he had consulted “many
eminent personages,” including the Cardinal of Toledo
prior to writing his thoughts on debasement,<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
as well as the fact that publication dates listed on books of that era—and
Mariana’s books in particular—are not one hundred percent reliable.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
The appearance of Mariana in Measure for
Measure is strong evidence that his views were, in fact, known.
opportunity to learn of Mariana’s views could have come when he served as a
“groom of the chamber” for Ambassador Juan Fernandez de Velasco and the Spanish
peace delegation at Somerset House for eighteen days—which included no acting
conversation turned to regicide—another of Shakespeare’s interests—Mariana’s
name would almost certainly have come up, and Shakespeare
have learned of Mariana’s
published book De Ponderibus et Mensuris (1599)
(Of Weights and Measures), which
discussed weights, measures, and coinage in ancient times and in
sixteenth-century Spain, and which could have formed a basis for a discussion
of Mariana’s views on debasement. Finally, he might have learned of Mariana through Pedro
Mantuan, the ambassador’s secretary, who had written a book critical of Mariana
just the year before.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
One of Shakespeare’s earliest known
“critics” appears to have recognized Elizabeth in Isabella or Juan de Mariana
in Mariana, or both. The director of the English Seminary at
By the same token, William Davenant’s removal of Mariana’s name and role in his post-restoration play The Law Against Lovers (1662)—a blend of Measure for Measure and Much Ado About Nothing<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>—may be further evidence of the significance of the name. As Shakespeare’s purported god-(if-not-biological)-son and self-styled literary heir, Davenant was in a position to know what Mariana’s name represented. At a time when Juan de Mariana’s name was well-known in England and was synonymous with treason,<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Davenant—an ardent royalist—would have needed little prompting to remove all traces of the old fomenter of regicide from his version of the play.
As others have observed, the Duke in Measure for Measure resembles King
may have cast himself in the play as the “fantastic” Lucio, the giver of light
who sheds light—both true and false—on the duke of dark corners. As Lindsay
Kaplan has pointed out, the “fantastic” in plays of this era normally signified
the dramatist himself.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]>
.<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Perhaps the best clue to Lucio’s identity is
his forced marriage to the woman he has gotten pregnant, a direct parallel to
Shakespeare’s own biography.
The names, identifying features, and conduct of the characters—not to mention the frequent metaphorical use of the debasement theme—all support the theory that Measure for Measure, like Hamlet, contained a commentary on debasement itself. Once the debasement allegory is understood, the “problems” of this problem play are no longer problematic. Isabella’s unwillingness to give up her virginity even to save her brother’s life and her silence in the face of the Duke’s proposal are understandable if Isabella represents the Virgin Queen. Mariana’s obsessive love for Angelo and willingness to marry him makes sense if Mariana represents Juan de Mariana and her love for Angelo represents the Jesuit’s concern for the stability of the coinage. Indeed, everyone’s willingness to forgive Angelo at the end of the play is necessary to the survival of the coinage. Finally, the punishment Lucio receives for his in-your-face slander (which some think is too light and others think is too severe) is perfectly appropriate and is in fact Shakespeare’s way of saying that (1) he didn’t mean any offense, (2) if he is to be punished, let King James follow the Duke’s example and marry him to someone he has gotten pregnant, and (3) since Shakespeare has already married someone that he has gotten pregnant, he must be beyond punishment.
It is difficult to resist a final bit of speculation about the genesis of Measure for Measure. Perhaps someone asked Shakespeare if he had intended “The Rape of Lucrece” as an allegory for debasement: After all, in that poem, a woman who is a model of purity and whose name happens to be practically synonymous with money (lucre) is debased by a member of a royal family (Tarquin), with the inevitable consequence that the woman dies and the royals are overthrown in favor of a republican government. Shakespeare’s response might have been that the allegory was unintentional—“Lucrece” was merely a truncation of “Lucretia,” the name in his original source, which as far as he knew did not pertain to debasement. But perhaps this caused him to think about how one might insert a debasement allegory into a play. The result was Measure for Measure.
* * * *
article has consisted of two distinct but related and mutually-reinforcing
parts. The new interpretations in Hamlet
are important because they bear on our assessment of Hamlet’s character (in
that under the coinage interpretation of the picture in little line, Hamlet is
less whiny and more
sarcastic); they suggest new ways of staging both the
picture in little line and the two pictures passage; and their absence in the
first quarto provides evidence that they were deliberately removed from that
version of the play, possibly to avoid giving offense to King James. If the
interpretations of Hamlet are correct, it is all the more likely that
Shakespeare worked the debasement allegory into Measure for Measure. and debasement
imagery; ties together connections that others have made between the Duke and
King James, Isabella and Elizabeth, Lucio and Shakespeare, and Angelo and the
“angel” coin; and offers answers to many of the questions that the play has
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> An early example occurs in
Aristophanes’s The Frogs (405 B.C.):
“We ourselves no longer like [the former silver and gold coinage] and prefer to
use for cash [a] debased barbaric tender—this new-fangled copper trash!
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Margaret Ferguson, “Hamlet: Letters and Spirits,” in Shakespeare and the Question of Theory, ed. Parker and Hartman (New York & London: Metheun Press, 1985), 292, 297 (noting Hamlet’s “pervasive concern with debased currency”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Unless otherwise noted, quotations from the text of Hamlet are from Hamlet, ed. Jenkins, The Arden Shakespeare (London: Methuen, 1982). Quotations from the first quarto of Hamlet are from The First Quarto of Hamlet, ed. Irace (Cambridge U.P. 1998). Quotations from the text of Measure for Measure are from Measure for Measure, ed. Lever, The Arden Shakespeare (London: Metheun, 1965). Quotations from other Shakespeare plays are from William Shakespeare: The Complete Works, ed. Wells and Taylor (Oxford U.P. 1988). Where a source cites a Shakespeare play, the line numbers used by the source are left intact.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Because of the intrinsic value of the metal used in coins, coins that had been clipped—i.e. had some of their precious metal shaved off—were common. See Peter L. Bernstein, The Power of Gold—The History of an Obsession (NY: John Wiley & Sons Inc. 2000), 176, 178–79. A coin that had been clipped beyond the ring encircling the sovereign’s head was considered not legal tender. Jenkins, ed., 262 (note to lines 424–25).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “[H]is very madness, like some ore//Among a mineral of metals base//Shows itself pure.” (4.1.25–27). Compare AWW 3.6.38–39 (“to what metal this counterfeit lump of ore will be melted”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Rosalind Miles, The Problem of Measure for Measure: A
Historical Investigation (New York: Barnes & Noble Books, Harper &
Row Publishers Inc., 1976), 208.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Assuming along with Lever and
others who contend that coming “to composition with the King of Hungary”
(1.2.1–2) alludes to the peace with Spain (e.g.
Lever, ed., xxxi), the first gentlemen’s comment to Lucio, “Heaven grant us its
peace, but not the King of Hungary’s” (1.2.4–5), refers as much to the actual
peace as to a debased Spanish “peece.”
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Mistress Overdone’s “sweat”
(1.2.75) has been taken as a reference to the plague (see, e.g., Lever, xxxii),
or a treatment for syphilis (see, e.g., John Jowett and Gary Taylor, “‘With New
Additions’: Theatrical Interpolation in Measure
for Measure,” in Shakespeare Reshaped,
ed. Taylor and Jowett,
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> William Warburton referred to the
phrase “pay down by weight” as “‘A fine expression, to signify paying the full
penalty. The metaphor is taken from paying money by weight, which is always exact; not so by tale, on account of the practice of diminishing the species [i.e.,
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Examples include Claudio’s lament that “Thus can the demigod, Authority,//Make us pay down for our offence by weight” (1.2.112–13); Angelo’s taunt to Isabella “Say what you can, my false o’erweighs your true” (2.4.169); the Duke-Friar’s assurance that the “corrupt deputy” would be “scaled” (3.1.255–56); the Duke’s ostensible defense of Angelo that “if he had so offended, He would have weigh’d thy brother by himself//And not have cut him off” (5.1.113–15).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Compare Cym. 2.5.4–7 (“[M]y father was I know not where//When I was stamped. Some coiner with his tools//Made me a counterfeit; yet my mother seemed//The Dian of that time . . . .”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The requirement that those who
brought a certain weight of bullion to the mint be repaid in coins of a
proportional weight—rather than coins of a certain face value—was referred to
as a “weight
by weight” system
and was the antithesis of debasement. See A
New History of the British Mint, ed. Challis (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Challis, ed., 240.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See G.B. Shaw, The History of Currency 1252–1896 (New York: August M. Kelley 1967), 122–29 (reciting contemporary criticism).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Sandra Fischer, Econolingua: A
Glossary of Coins and Economic Language in Renaissance Drama (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Challis, ed., 248 (noting that
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Julian Goodare and Michael Lynch, “James VI: Universal King?,” in The Reign of James VI, ed. Goodare and Lynch (Trowbridge, Wilshire: Cromwell Press 2000), 10 (describing debasements that had taken place in the late 1570s, and from 1581–96); ibid., “Chronology,” 259 (noting “major currency debasement” of 1602); S.J. Houston, James I (New York: Longman Publishing 2d ed. 1995), 6 (stating that James I had debased the Scottish silver coinage between 1583 and 1596).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Rosalind Mitchison, A History of Scotland (London & New York: Methuen 2d ed. 1982), 134–35 (stating that “the pound Scots slipped from being worth a quarter of the pound sterling in 1560 to a twelfth in 1600”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See John Cramsie, Kingship and
Crown Finance Under James VI and I, 1603–25 (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jesse Lander has detected concern about a possible future debasement in Fulbecke’s A Parallele (1601), based on its discussion of the question whether a debtor use debased coin to repay a debt incurred before the debasement. Jesse M. Lander, “Crack’d Crowns and Counterfeit Sovereigns: The Crisis of Value in 1 Henry IV,” Shakespeare Studies (Annual 2002), 156.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Lever, ed., xxxi. A growing
literature on the subject attests that Shakespeare’s views on economics worked
themselves into his plays. See, e.g., Fischer, Econolingua; Lander; Jonathan Gil Harris, Sick Economies: Drama,
Mercantilism, and Disease in Shakespeare’s England (U. of Pennsylvania P.
); Frederick Turner, Shakespeare's
Twenty-First-Century Economics: The Morality of Love and Money (Oxford U.P.
1999); Douglas Bruster, Drama and the Market in the Age of
Shakespeare (Cambridge U.P. 1992); Nina Levine,
“Extending Credit in the Henry IV Plays,” Shakespeare Quarterly, 51: 4
(Winter 2000), 403; Sandra K. Fischer, “‘He Means To Pay’: Value and Metaphor
in the Lancastrian Tetralogy,” Shakespeare Quarterly, 40:2 (Summer
1989), 163; Stephen X. Mead, “‘Thou Art Changed’: Public Value and Personal
Identity in Troilus and Cressida”; Journal
of Medieval and Renaissance Studies 22:2 (Spring 1992), 237. That Measure for Measure is recognized to
contain more coinage references than any other Shakespeare play is apparent
from a review of the notes by Lever, Gibbons, and Eccles in their editions of Measure for Measure; R.J. Kaufman ties
these references together as evidence of a strong economic theme. R.J.
Kaufmann, “Bond Slaves and Counterfeits: Shakespeare’s Measure for Measure,”
in Shakespeare Studies III
(U. Cinn. 1967), 85.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> It would also be consistent with the play’s theme concerning the division between appearances and reality. See John Paterson, “The Word in Hamlet,” Shakespeare Quarterly, 2:1 (Jan. 1951), 47–55, esp. 50–52.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> As discussed below, the Folio version includes 24 lines relating to child actors here that do not appear in the second quarto.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The number fifty appears in the second quarto, but not the Folio version.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Both the Folio and second quarto use “a peece,” which most modern editors have collapsed to “apiece.”
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The New Folger Library Shakespeare Hamlet, ed. Mowat and Werstine (New York: Washington Square Press, 1992), 104.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Peter Brimacombe, All the Queen’s
Men: The World of Elizabeth I (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Both A.C. Bradley and Harold Jenkins, although accepting the literal “miniature portrait” interpretation, appear to stumble over the line. Bradley observes that Claudius is an insecure king even “though” people are paying large sums of money for his portrait. A.C. Bradley, Shakespearean Tragedy (1904) (Greenwich, Conn.: Fawcett Publications 1965), 142–43. His “though” suggests surprise at the underlying fact, which, it turns out, he has misinterpreted. Jenkins, relying on the “miniature portrait” interpretation, concludes that the line does not follow naturally in the second quarto, and deduces from this that the “little eyases” passage, present in the Folio but not in the second quarto, must have been cut from the second quarto (as opposed to having been added to the Folio). Jenkins, ed., 3.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Fischer, Econolingua, 105 (providing additional contemporary examples).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Fischer, Econolingua, 105 (defining “piece” as “Any coin or piece of money,” and providing contemporary examples from Shakespeare and others). See also supra note 7 (noting pun of “peace” with “piece” in Measure for Measure).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> William Shakespeare, The Late Romances, ed. Bevington (New York: Bantam Books 1988), 274.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In Shakespeare’s lifetime, no
country had issued a 100-ducat coin. 100-ducat coins issued by
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Members of the audience familiar with Scottish currency would have readily appreciated the “shrinking” effect that debasement has on the coinage. During Shakespeare’s time, Scottish currency included four, six, and twenty pound coins—denominations that would have resulted in coins of unthinkable size in English coinage—owing to the fact that over the years, Scottish coinage had been debased compared to English coinage by a factor of twelve.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins, ed., 338.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Hamlet, ed. Mowat and Werstine, The New Folger Library Shakespeare (New York: Washington Square Press 1992), 192.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Shakespeare also equates “countenance” with the “face” on a coin in Love’s Labour’s Lost, when Holofernes claims to have been “put out of countenance,” and his tormentors respond by giving him “faces,” including the face on an old Roman coin. LLL, 5.2.601–15.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Alison Thorne, Vision and
Rhetoric in Shakespeare: Looking Through Language (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See, e.g., Hamlet,
ed. Furness, A New Variorum Edition of
Shakespeare, 2 vols. (Philadelphia: J.B. Lippincott, 1877) (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Furness, ed., 1:290 (“‘Ham., who in a former scene had censured those who gave ‘forty, fifty ducats a-piece’ for his uncle’s ‘picture in little,’ would hardly have condescended to carry such a thing in his pocket’” (quoting George Steevens).).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Furness, ed., 1:290 (“It is evident from the words, ‘a station &c.,’ that these pictures, which are introduced as miniatures on the stage, were meant for whole lengths, being part of the furniture of the queen’s closet” (quoting George Steevens).).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins, ed., 518. For an argument
for tapestries, see Ralph Berry, “Shakespeare’s
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The New Folger Library Shakespeare Hamlet, ed. Mowat and Werstine, 174.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins, ed., 322.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “Counterfeit” was used to describe
fake or base money in Shakespeare’s day, and Shakespeare used it in this sense
on more than one occasion. See, e.g. 1 Henry IV, 2.5.497–98
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> As in “fair Portia’s counterfeit,” MV
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The modern production in which
Michael Redgrave used a coin for Claudius and a locket for Old Hamlet (Shakespeare in Production: Hamlet, ed.
Hapgood (Cambridge U.P. 1999), 212 n.65) was therefore half right. See also
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins defines “thin” as “the natural condition of the blood in health.” Jenkins, ed., 219.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Graham Webster, Boudica: The
British Revolt Against
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> It was only relatively recently that
scholars concluded that the pervasive debased Claudius coins were counterfeits
rather than official issues. See A.R. Burns, Money and Monetary Policy in Early Times (1929) (Sentry Press:
reprint 1965), 167 (noting in 1929 that “[f]our-fifths of the issues of
Claudius . . . are said to have been base,” but expressing doubt that the
debased coins were official issues); see also Jonathan Williams, Money: A History (New York: St. Martin’s
Press 1998), 53 (describing the “epidemics of forgery” in Britain that occurred
during Claudius’s reign).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In fact, Cloten’s declaration in Cymbeline that “There will be many
Caesars,//Ere such another Julius.
it’s likely that Cymbeline’s later
reference to Mulmutius as “the first of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> John Cunnally, Images of the Illustrious: The Numismatic Presence in the Renaissance (Princeton U.P. 1999), esp. 105–22 (discussing the popularity and proliferation of books about coin collecting in the 1500s); ibid., 4 (observing that ancient coins “were the most fluid of all antiquities, enjoying a vigorous circulation in Renaissance Europe”); ibid., 40 (noting that Thomas More (1478–1535) was a coin collector).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Shakespeare’s use of “coinage” in this line is the earliest use of coinage in the sense of “That which is made, devised or invented,” listed in the Oxford English Dictionary (OED.6). In this case, Gertrude’s metaphor may well have given rise to a whole new sense of the word.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See supra note 30 and accompanying text.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See, e.g., Goodare and Lynch
(describing “the notorious ‘black money’ of James III [of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Dante used the same device in depicting the debaser’s Adamo stomach as bloated with dropsy. Dante Alighieri, Inferno XXX.52–54, 119–126.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Quarto version, 1608 (20.83–84). See
additional discussion of this line below in note
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Shakespeare may have been
intentionally ambiguous here. Those who, unlike Hamlet, see Claudius as an
effective ruler are free to believe that the debasement was necessary in view of
the impending war with
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Quoted in full above in the discussion of the “picture in little line.”
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins, ed., 472.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Roslyn L. Knutson, “Falconer to the Little Eyases: A New Date and Commercial Agenda for the ‘Little Eyases’ Passage in Hamlet,” Shakespeare Quarterly, 46:1 (Spring 1995), 17 (citing W.J. Lawrence, Shakespeare’s Workshop (Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1928), 105).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Steve Roth, “Hamlet, II.II.332: ‘Their Inhibition Comes by the Means of the Late Innovation,’” Notes and Queries 50:1 (March 2003), 43–46.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Roth, 43–44 (citing David Farley-Hills, Shakespeare and the Rival Playwrights 1600–1606 (London: Routledge, 1990)).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See generally Jenkins, ed., 471–73 (discussing various possible meanings for “inhibition” and “innovation”); Knutson, 17–23; Furness, ed., 1:162–64 n.320.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Although it is true that Shakespeare elsewhere used “innovation” in the sense of “insurrection” (1 Henry IV, 5.1.78), “innovation” was also used during Shakespeare’s time in the sense of “the alteration of what is established by the introduction of new elements or forms,” OED.1, which could easily describe a debasement of the coinage.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Rosencrantz’s uncertainty is reinforced by the presence of a question mark at the end of this line in F (but not in Q2). While many editors have simply left the question mark out on the basis that its absence in Q2 suggests that it is merely a printer’s error, it may well have been intentionally in the texts that underlie both F and Q2 to emphasize that Rosencrantz was just guessing (and the printer’s error would therefore have been its omission from Q2).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In contrast, if the “inhibition”
referred to an official order (whether issued because of the plague or
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Money saved or invested in fixed
annuities could rapidly disappear in a debasement. Shakespeare appears to have
hedged his bets against a possible debasement by purchasing crop-producing
farmland. See Stephen Greenblatt, Will in
the World: How Shakespeare Became Shakespeare (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See, e.g., Glyn Davies, A History
of Money from Ancient Times to the Present Day (U. of Wales P. 2002),
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In Shakespeare’s time, “praise” had the double-meaning of “appraise.” OED.v.I.1 (“To set a price or value upon; to value or appraise”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “Indifferently” can be read as “moderately well.” Jenkins, ed., 289 n.36.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Lander, 144, citing The Summarie of Certain Reasons which have moved the Queenes Maiestie to procede in reformations of here base & corse monies.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Mead, 237 (noting similar use of “set down” in Ulysses’s speech about Cressida in Tro.4.5.54-63 where Cressida is the coin).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins, ed., 338 n.26–7.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Jenkins, ed., 525–26, esp. 525 (finding it “impossible to agree with Furness, Kittredge, and others that this or anything Hamlet says is meant to be mere nonsense”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See, e.g. Knutson, 7–13, esp. 11–12 (discussing scholarship on Q1). More recent scholarship includes Kathleen O. Irace, Reforming the ‘Bad’ Quartos: Performance and Provenance of Six Shakespearean First Editions (U. of Delaware P. 1994) (finding evidence of memorial reconstruction); Laurie Macguire, Shakespearean Suspect Texts: The ‘Bad’ Quartos and Their Contexts (Cambridge U.P. 1996) (finding that “a case can be made” that Q1 is a memorial reconstruction); see also Paul Werstine, “A Century of ‘Bad’ Shakespeare Quartos,” Shakespeare Quarterly, 50:3 (Fall 1999), 310–33 (arguing that attempts to verify the memorial reconstruction hypothesis have not been successful).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Jenkins, ed., 1–7, 472–73.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Knutson, 9; Jenkins, ed., 472–73.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Based on the text of Q1, one can infer that any performance tied to Q1 was not actually staged with coins.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> In Q1, this line has been changed
to: “To leave him that bore a Monarch’s mind,//For a king of clouts, of very
shreds” (11.43–44). <![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Assuming Q2’s “blowt” was meant to
allude to inflation, F’s substitution of “blunt” might evidence an attempt to
mute the debasement theme in the copy underlying F, which could also explain
F’s insertion of the “little eyases” digression between the “innovation” line
and the “picture in little line.”
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The King of Q1 has no name at all. In Q2 and F, the King’s name is never spoken, but appears in a stage direction.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Given that Hamlet’s line responds to the player’s statement “My Lorde, wee haue indifferently reformed that among vs” (Q1) or “I hope we haue reform’d that indifferently with vs” (Q2), the substitution of “mend” for “reform” in Hamlet’s response strongly supports the argument that if Q1 is a memorial reconstruction, the performance it was reconstructing differed significantly from Q2. Otherwise, the reconstructor would certainly have remembered that “reform” was used in the actor’s statement as well as Hamlet’s response. The presence of examples in Q1 that do not appear in the Q2 also strongly suggests a different underlying text.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Without the notion of something being set down specifically for the clown—like a fixed value for a crown based on its gold content—the pun for crown, with the underlying theme of debasement, vanishes.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> While the line “more than all the
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “A different reason for the omission of passages in the performance of a play was political expediency. Both Elizabeth and James I frequently witnessed stage performances, and a natural consequence of this personal patronage was a strict censorship of plays presented before them.” The Cambridge History of English and American Literature, ed. A. W. Ward & A. R. Waller (Cambridge: 1907–21), vol. 5, ch. XI, § 4.
There is evidence that King Lear’s insistence on the royal prerogative may also have been controversial and subject to censorship. Whereas in the quarto version (1608), the mad Lear says “No, they cannot touch me for coining, I am the King himself,” (20.83–84), the Folio (1623) substitutes the word “crying” for “coining” in this line (4.5.83–84). Quite possibly, “coining” was Shakespeare’s original word, but the vision of putting what may well have been James I’s words with respect to a debasement into the mouth of a deranged king may have been deemed imprudent or dangerous. Thus, a version containing the safer word (“crying”) was used for staging the play, and this other version was used to prepare the Folio.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> For further discussion of the parallels, see Lilian Winstanley, Hamlet and the Scottish Succession (Cambridge U.P. 1921), 48–71.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> This change had the added benefit of avoiding offense to King James’s wife, Anne of Denmark.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The question whether Q1 is more closely tied to the text underlying Q2 or the text underlying F remains a matter of debate, which is beyond the scope of this paper to fully address. See, e.g., G.R. Hibbard, “The Chronology of the Three Substantive Texts of Shakespeare’s Hamlet,” in The Hamlet First Published, ed. Clayton (Cranbury, New Jersey: Associated U.P. 1992), pp. 79–89. If anything, the contribution of this article to that debate is the observation that Q1’s use of “restie” for F’s “rusty” supports arguments that Q1 was based on the text underlying F.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> There are several possible explanations for why Q2 was allowed to be published in spite of its potentially offensive contents. It may have been published by someone who was unaware of the references to debasement or the parallels with Mary Queen of Scots. On the other hand, perhaps by the time it was published in 1604 the publisher had reason to believe that James would not take offense.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> It is not until the Third Act that we learn that he behaved badly toward Mariana five years before.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Kaufman, 89–90 (noting that
“[t]he Duke’s opening speech is heavily
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Fischer, 121 (defining “slip” as “a counterfeit coin,” and citing examples from Merchant of Venice, Romeo and Juliet, and Troilus and Cressida).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See note 9, supra.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Isabella and Ferdinand are credited with having stabilized the Spanish currency in 1497, see J.H. Elliott, Imperial Spain 1469–1716 (New York, St. Martin’s Press 1963), pp. 122–23; John Porteus, Coins in History (New York: G.P. Putnam’s Sons 1969), 151–53, and one could also argue that the legend that Isabella was willing to pawn her pearls to finance Columbus’s voyage was a statement against debasement.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See, e.g., Juliet Dusinberre, Shakespeare
and the Nature of Women (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> C.E. Challis, The Tudor Coinage, 205–08 (Manchester U.P. 1978) (discussing various proposals to address the problem of small change with debased coinage).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Kaufman, 93.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Glyn Davies, 200–01 (noting that the process of debasement “reached its nadir . . . under the young King Edward VI in 1551”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> As discussed above in note 50 and
accompanying text, Emperor Claudius—the victim of rampant counterfeiting in
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Lever, ed., 17.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “We have strict statutes and most biting
laws . . . which for this fourteen years we have let slip.” 1.3.19–21. In
Shakespeare’s normal parlance, “letting slip” things that bite—like “the dogs
of war” (Julius Caesar 3.1.276)—means
releasing them so that they have maximum effect. Editors who overlook the
coinage angle to this line are hard-pressed to explain why “letting slip” in
this case seems to mean the opposite. See, e.g., Lever, ed., 20 (begging the
question by citing the OED’s “withdraw the head from the collar” as a
definition for slip). Understanding that a slip was a debased or counterfeit
coin (see supra note
94, ) suggests that
the time period in question was a period of debasement, when laws regarding the
purity of the coinage were ignored.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Lever, ed., 17 (proposing a forgetful Shakespeare or a compositor’s error).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> James Ellison, “Measure for Measure and the Executions of Catholics in 1604,” English Literary Renaissance 33:1 (2003), 77.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The publication in 1609 of Mariana’s
complete views on debasement in Of the
Alteration of Money (De Mutatione
Monetae) as one of a set of seven treatises (Tractatus VII) resulted in his arrest, trial and incarceration by
the Spanish Inquisition. Guenter Lewy, Constitutionalism and Statecraft
During the Golden Age of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> It has been argued that
Shakespeare’s interest in Spain surfaces to varying degrees in Love’s
Labour’s Lost, The Merchant of Venice, King John, All’s
Well that Ends Well, Much Ado About Nothing, Henry VIII, Cymbeline
and The Tempest. See Susan Onega, “The Impact of the Spanish Armada on
Elizabethan Literature,” in
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> R.B. Wernham, The Return of the Armadas: The Last Years of the Elizabethan Wars Against Spain 1595–1603 (Oxford: Clarendon Press 1994), 269–72 (describing how reports of Spinola’s movements in the Channel in 1599 had prompted “defence preparations by sea and even more by land on a scale comparable to those of 1588”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Paul C. Allen, Philip III and
the Pax Hispanica 1598–1621: The Failure of Grand
(Yale U.P. 2000), 62.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> R.A. Stradling, The Armada of Flanders: Spanish Maritime Policy and the European War, 1568–1668 (Cambridge U.P. 1992), 22, 24; see also Juan de Mariana, The King and His Education (De Rege et Regis Institutione), ed. & transl. G.A. Moore (Washington, DC: North Washington Press 1948), 291 (recommending a policy encouraging provincials to “build swift ships or ones of light draft out of their private funds, so that they may act as pirates and ferociously and fearsomely burst into the confines of the impious peoples”); ibid., 293–94 (hoping for return to the days when “barons, in proportion to their fortunes and incomes, accompanied by a certain number of horsemen, went to the wars like kings”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> On Federigo’s claim to “greatness,”
see Stradling, 11 (describing Federigo’s hereditary “maritime genius”), ibid.,
13 (“Naval historians now accept that Federigo’s flotilla made a powerful
impact.”); R. Trevor Davies, The Golden Age of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Ellison, 77.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The story of Campion’s capture included a meeting between informer Eliot and the house’s cook on the drawbridge. See Richard Simpson, Edmund Campion: Jesuit Protomartyr of England (London: Burns & Oates 1907), 315; ibid. 310 (describing Lyford as a “moated grange”); Evelyn Waugh, Edmund Campion (New York: Sheed & Ward 1935), 154 (describing the moat and drawbridge at Lyford Grange).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See generally Richard Wilson,
“Shakespeare and the Jesuits: New Connections Supporting the Theory of the Lost
Catholic Years in
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Richard Desper managed to find six
references to Edmund Campion in a scant five lines of Twelfth Night : “Bonos dies, Sir Toby: for, as the old hermit of
Prague, that never saw pen and ink, very wittily said to a niece of King
Gorboduc, ‘that that is is’; so Im being master Parson, am master parson; for,
what is ‘that’ but ‘that’; and ‘is’ but ‘is’? (IV.ii.15–19). C. Richard Desper,
“Allusions to Edmund Campion in Twelfth Night,” Elizabethan Review (Spring 1995
Similarly, Richard Wilson sees “Friar Patrick” in The Two Gentlemen of Verona as an allusion to Campion, and suggests
that Shakespeare’s “proximity to Campion’s mission may have shaped [his] entire
dramatic stragey.” Richard : Shakespeare’s Milan,” in Shakespeare and the Mediterranean, ed.
Clayton, Brock and Fores (Newark: U. Del. P. 2004), 416, 421.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See E.E. Reynolds, Campion and Parsons: The Jesuit
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> David Hugh Farmer, The
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Honigman, 40.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Honigman, 6 (speculating that John Cottom was the “John Cotham,” who, along with William Shakeshafte, was a legatee under Alexander Hoghton’s will); id., 40–49 (providing additional information on Thomas Cottam and John Cottom).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> De Rege,
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Caroline Bingham, James I of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> De Rege,
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> David Mathew, James I (Alabama
U.P. 1968), 189 (quoting from James’s “A Remonstrance for the Rights of Kings,
and the Independance of their Crownes” (1615)). Gerard Yates, in his forward to
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> “What a merit were it in death to take this poor maid from the world!” (3.1.231–32).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Lewy, 13–14.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Lewy, 27. Alan Soons’s assertion that Mariana had denounced debasement in a chapter of De Rege prior to the onset of Philip III’s 1599 debasement (Alan Soons, Juan de Mariana (Boston: Twayne Publishers 1982), 16) may be evidence of a difference between 1599 editions.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The speculation that Robert Arden, a
canon of Toledo with connections to Edmund Campion, was related to
Shakespeare’s mother (Wilson, “‘Every Third Thought,’” 419), provides a very
tenuous link between Mariana and Shakespeare.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Thomas Kernan, The Life and Works of
Juan de Mariana (Master’s Thesis 1923) (available at Woodstock Library,
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Lewy, 29 n.63 (noting that Mariana’s Tractatus VII, nominally published in 1609, appeared in a 1608 bibliography of Jesuit writings).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Samuel Schoenbaum, William Shakespeare: A Documentary Life (New York: Oxford U.P. 1975), 196, 199; Ernest Law, Shakespeare as a Groom of the Chamber (London: G. Bell & Sons 1910).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> After a siege that had lasted more
than three years, Ambrosio entered
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Kernan, V-16.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Archbishop of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Frank Kermode, Shakespeare’s Age
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Kermode, 39.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> The prominent debasement theme might also explain why Measure for Measure was among the plays not published in Shakespeare’s lifetime. It may have been written for private circulation or private performances, and the official performance before King James might have used different names. See also supra note 132 (noting theory that Measure for Measure was revised after 1606).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Davenant, William, The Law Against Lovers, in The works of Sir William Davenant (
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Mariana’s De Rege was “apparently widely known and read” during the years
leading up to the Commonwealth.
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See, e.g., Carolyn E. Brown, “Duke
Vincentio of ‘Measure for Measure’ and King James I of
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Challis, 234–35 (explaining that the government did not advertise that its mints were producing debased coin).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> See Lever, ed., 94 (“Angelo is the spurious “angel” in terms of the coin imagery . . . .”).
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> M. Lindsay Kaplan, The Culture of
Slander in Early Modern
<![if !supportFootnotes]><![endif]> Kaplan, 98 (noting the “uncanny . .
. accuracy” of Lucio’s predictions). Examples of Lucio’s omniscience include
his statement to the Duke-Friar “I know what I know” (3.2.148), and his
apparent knowledge that Claudio is not really dead, as when he tells Isabella,
“I am pale at mine heart to see thine eyes so red: thou must be patient”